"White linens ripped in three halves, one for death, two more for kites" - What a wonderful line, Mya. I just finished David Copperfield, which features Mr. Dick a sort of kite-flying Buddha, so I'm keen on kites at the moment - how auspicious. xo
Thank you so much for your thoughts, Nathan; I wonder if it's down to the way these words feel when you say them and the images they conjure up? That's what I get sometimes, kind of a multi-sensory experience, I guess.
"White linens ripped in three halves, one for death, two more for kites" - What a wonderful line, Mya. I just finished David Copperfield, which features Mr. Dick a sort of kite-flying Buddha, so I'm keen on kites at the moment - how auspicious. xo
Oh wow, auspicious indeed! Thank you Troy 💛
Mya, this is absolutely beautiful. 🤩
So kind of you to say so, Rebecca, thank you and Happy New Year! 💜
How gorgeous
Thank you muchly, Matt!
You’re so welcome ☺️
Magical Mya <3
Thank you so much, Kathryn!
“~Chasing for punctures
in liminal seas
all heartbeats succoured~” So many exquisite moments!
Thank you so much Kimberley!
"Croissant de moon"
"Hushing the skittish."
I love all these lines in this post, but these two in particular.
Thank you so much for your thoughts, Nathan; I wonder if it's down to the way these words feel when you say them and the images they conjure up? That's what I get sometimes, kind of a multi-sensory experience, I guess.
Yes, there's a delightful feel through all of these words. You always manage that. A wonderful talent ☺️
Thank you so much Nathan!
Perfection
Thank you so much, Louise!
Mya, this was wonderful!
There are so many great lines. And the whole piece sings with its own unique lyricism. :)
Below are a few lines I really liked:
“ it is my playful duty
to stretch wide in the breeze”
“Audacious sea lions spilt
the cadence of malaise,
urban foes to pestilence”
“Croissant de moon slicing open
linen Sisyphean of the seas
secateurs of calligraphy”
Thank you so much Michael, for such a generous comment and sharing your favourite lines; it is always wonderful to learn what resonates with whom!